You want another chapter?!

So, like I said in my last post (Oh what to add in and what not to add in) I uploaded a short story to protagonize.com to see if I could get some feedback on it. Sure enough, one person gave the story 4.50 out of 5 rating which was awesome. But this one person also did something which got my head buzzing as well; they put a page marker on my story. This means that there awaiting the next chapter.

What next smeggin chapter?! It was only supposed to be a short story! Panic ensues as I throw things in the air and roll around on the floor. I could do with hoovering up this place?

However, out of this worry came more ideas. I’m currently in the planning stage of the next chapter of this story. It is a vampire-esque fable and I’d like to expand on that aspect first before the political side of the story. Maybe I should show how our hero and/or villain feeds with his new found powers?

As always, if you could have a read and give me your thoughts it would be most appreciated. The link is on my last post.

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3 thoughts on “You want another chapter?!

  1. Pingback: Ideas and musings « johnrsermon

    • Hello k.e

      It is good to be prodded for another chapter your right but I’m not sure how to take the story onto a next chapter. I have a few ideas but what do you reckon? Have you a chance to read my story yet?

      I had a roam around your facebook page and it looks really good. What hints might you have for improving a blog or indeed my blog?
      Cheers

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