So, like I said in my last post (Oh what to add in and what not to add in) I uploaded a short story to protagonize.com to see if I could get some feedback on it. Sure enough, one person gave the story 4.50 out of 5 rating which was awesome. But this one person also did something which got my head buzzing as well; they put a page marker on my story. This means that there awaiting the next chapter.
What next smeggin chapter?! It was only supposed to be a short story! Panic ensues as I throw things in the air and roll around on the floor. I could do with hoovering up this place?
However, out of this worry came more ideas. I’m currently in the planning stage of the next chapter of this story. It is a vampire-esque fable and I’d like to expand on that aspect first before the political side of the story. Maybe I should show how our hero and/or villain feeds with his new found powers?
As always, if you could have a read and give me your thoughts it would be most appreciated. The link is on my last post.
johnrsermon 
It’s good to have people prod a “next” chapter out of you! Saw your post on Writer FB group and am cruising around your site.
Hello k.e
It is good to be prodded for another chapter your right but I’m not sure how to take the story onto a next chapter. I have a few ideas but what do you reckon? Have you a chance to read my story yet?
I had a roam around your facebook page and it looks really good. What hints might you have for improving a blog or indeed my blog?
Cheers